A thing that could really help you is if you download some better sounding samples. It would really help this track a bit.
Also, a bit more thickness to your song would help too. Adding more sounds and effects could make your track go a long ways.
But the things I really enjoyed are that sliding hat sound and that distant spooky feeling effect in your track. That really added a lot of flavor to this submission. Maybe if you stuck with a spooky theme? Who knows. Just keep on trying to improve on your style!!! That's what I constantly try to do and I hope that everyone else does to.