AznPB's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[)(Ruff_01 beat)(]

Oh hell no

You stole this man. I'm sick and totally disgusted as to what you just did. Even though it cuts off and restarts you still used a component which does not belong to you. It's copyrighted material and you could get into some deep shit for doin this.

Ruff-01 responds:

no my friend made most of it i help him out a littel and he said i could post it on NG

[Chopping & Breaks (60 s. beta)]

You can do better

I understand that this is a beta but what's the point of submitting a beta? Might as well wait to finished the completed version eh? Well here's my review.

Beat:
Nice beat. Even though it was very complex and interesting, I found it rather boring after a while. If you had more than one layer of drums then it would liven things up a little. Try (VERY) different variations of the beats too. Like add a tiny breakbeat part of it's own at one time or another. That would sure wake up the listener.

Synth:
Rather oring and basic. yet again, I understand that this is a beta and you "threw it in" for "substance" but I am reviewing your work regardless. You could've tried for a nice melody of some kind instead of a droning sounding one. Maybe a highpitched synth with a nice melody could've made this ten times better. If the melody changed as often as the beat did without straying to ofar away from it's original melody then again, more points for you.

Overall:
Nice beats, crappy synths, mediocre piece of work. But I have offered you some tips and I hope you use them to improve upon yourself. Remember, it's not what you think sounds cool, it's what sells to the people best.

Ineptitude responds:

wow, first off, thank you very much for your long in-depth review. i agree with most of it and appreciate the constructive criticism a lot.

i really like this style of music, and this was just my first real try and some beats with some slapdash synths, both of which could've been improved as you said. i'll take your suggestions into account in making a final version. i hadn't planned on pursuing a finished product with this one, even though it was termed 'beta,' but your advice makes me want to see what i can do with it.

i do, however, disagree with your final, ending point. music should come from your soul, be what YOU like, and not be "all about the money." playing to the people, as you advise in your last sentence, often ends bands up as sell outs with no real heart to their music.

regardless, thanks again. look for improved music from me in the future. i plan on staying awhile.

[This is What You Want]

Good Job

Sick beats man. This is really awesome. It really reminded me of Streets of Rage for some reason. Other than that this is a nice submission. Really makes me wanna hit some one. And that acid? Damn... Love acid when it's used right and you did pretty good manipulating it.

Downsides are: That strange synth that comes in later in the song... I think that pretty much killed it. If it was a hard hitting synth or something then this would've gotten a five.
And then it seemed rather repetative to me and kinda longer than what it should be. Maybe if you kinda squashed some parts intogether with others and made this shorter, it would bea plus also.

Again, this is good and I hope other submissions will be better than this as you progress.

ColdLogic responds:

thanks for the review man, I thought it would notify me if i got one, heh your input is helpful. may 17th oh man...

[robo war 128k mp3 version]

Alright but...

It's a rather short peace of work and I think you could've done more with it actually. Maybe chanegd up the bass, added a synth, a new beat stream... But that's just me. I hope to see a revamped version of this. I think this could go far but in it's current state, it's kinda bland.

y2kh8r responds:

yeah, the full version is 2 minutes long, but for use if flash videos, I thought a small loopable segment would be best.

[The Glorious Stretch]

Thank you!

One of the not so many users who's music arous my interests. It even souinds better than most of the bull I hear these days on the portal...

Well, I was just browsing around, looking at competition in the Industrial section of AP and I found you at the top of the list. There was also a five rating so I went to check out and see if your submission deserved it in my eyes. So here I am reviewing your submission.

I LOVE the beat man! Really nice. The other sounds are very creative in a sense and found it quite refreshing! :D I liked this song and hope you come out with more pleasing items!

Wanion responds:

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it!

[-Absolute Zero-]

OMG

THIS SONG IS SICK! Thnx for using one of my synths, but it doesn't fit very well into the song. Maybe I'll make another synth that'll go with it?

TheComet responds:

With all the synths you recently sent me, I'll probably make a newer version or something...hmmm...:)

[Sub-Rave]

Ugh

Comet . . . That nasty little gurgling sound totally jacked up that song, I'm sorry. And s Evil-Dog said, I belive him when he says you really don't put much time and effort in your songs. Or, at least it doesn't sound like it.

I gave this song a 6/10 just becuase of that gurgling sound, but everything else (like the beat) was good. But that GURGLING SOUND!!!!

Make a remix of this, wihtout thast gurgling sound & with a melody, then I'll give you maybe a 9+/10, ^-^

TheComet responds:

That gurgling sound was the arp bass...the signature of this song :P
Like Paranoia's bass, this has it's "signature" or "trademark" (I've made about 5 paranoia remixes, it's my best DJed song in my opinion)

[Rocket Jockey - lazy day]

Orgasmic

OMG! This is awesome.

Jeez! This loop is emaculate. (Did I spell that right?)

NE Wayz, this loops deserved a 9/10 : 4/5.

Only becuz loops funny like.

Ranxx responds:

Thanks main.