Star
Wow. Those vocals took it one step farther than the majority of tracks on the audio portal. It was very refreshing. ;)
There was a lot of variety in Star, which I find awesomo. The beat variations and what not. ;) My only complaint though is I think you could've did a bit more with the melody. It's fine the way it is but I just think it could be greater than it is in this state. You know?
Overall, excellent. :)
The vocals made this song one of the best ;)
The melody could of had more tweaking, but it still came out good.
Rofl
Even with all of the sounds I kept on thinking someone was signing in or trying to message me. :P Good job on this one. Very creative. :)
Yeah, I once played every song in my Windows Media Player library, and unfortunately it played this one just as I was signing into MSN...
Definate improvement
You're getting really great at what you do now. Surprised you used to come to me for help! Look at you now! Great stuff man, I'm really impressed with how far you've come along in just three, four months.
Your sounds are crystal clear and pretty nifty. Lots of thing complimenting eachother. The beats are awesome. Especially the little three step you put in there! I also enjoy the melody you have at the end. Gave me some closure knowing there's a melody in there.
If you'd like to take this one step farther, making this into a more epic piece would greatly improve upon it. Only suggestion I can really make at this point in time.
I don't mean to be corny or anything but you were a great tutor :'). You are still one of the best artists on here. You need to submit concordia and fast, that track is friggin amazing. The three step was the toughest part of the track to get right, but I suppose it turned out right in the end. Thanks so much for the kind words man, they mean alot :)
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Hmmm
To start things off, the bass during the intro (which seemed to last forever) really threw things off. There wasn't much variation in your music either. It was sort of all the same thing over and over, with new instruments that come in. You should really vary between your melodies and sounds make it differentalmost all of the time so listeners don't get bored. :(
of course ur gonna git bored, its tekno music! duh. and its only like, .3 seconds of bass in the intro, i dont know what you have wedged up ur ass...
It's ok
A thing that could really help you is if you download some better sounding samples. It would really help this track a bit.
Also, a bit more thickness to your song would help too. Adding more sounds and effects could make your track go a long ways.
But the things I really enjoyed are that sliding hat sound and that distant spooky feeling effect in your track. That really added a lot of flavor to this submission. Maybe if you stuck with a spooky theme? Who knows. Just keep on trying to improve on your style!!! That's what I constantly try to do and I hope that everyone else does to.
yeah i was feeling i bit lazy on this track. youve got a good point, and it looks like people like this one, so i think i may do a second one
Been a long time
Since you've submitted a track. Five months? That's a wide span of time that should have allowed you to improve greatly. :)
As for the track, I don't know what to say about it considering you said it was a "remix" so I don't know if any of it's original or not. But pretending it is, this is some fantastic stuff man. :) I love all of the sounds and the composition is very well uh... Composed! ;) I especially love the gong and bell sounds. They added more of an ominous feel to it. The piano solos were especially nice, adding a bit of flavor to this track. :)
Again, I don't know if this is super original or a rip or anything. Still, it's nice.
diffenantly not a rip, and i changed the melody slightly and added in my own stuff, and thanks ^^ thank you allot, I great apreciate your review and compliments
No!!!
You can't stop making music Fan! If you really like composing your stuff,then keep on doing so! Don't let other people stop you from what you like doing! That is, of course, you like making music of course. Take what people say and mold it into more music whether it be postive or negative input! Just don't give up so easy!
haha theres noway im giving up yo! i know i said it like 34252384572383479 times, but yea, i think im getting better, im getting new equiptment and stuff so i can make actual good songs finally =P but hey! your speech inspired me to do more! YAYTHANKS!
Very original
This track is pretty schway man. You know your stuff. Most of it is frickin' awesome. I'm actually pretty jealous. I wish I could make REAL music instead of what I usually compose. Tance, techno, dnb.
The sine sound that is a mix between a bell and a whistle? That really held the piece together. Good job on that. ;) Also, the voice fx was a cool addition too. You just couldn't understand what it was saying and it didn't sound too realistic. But still, that's what makes it cool. ;)
My major problem with your track, although composed masterfully, your sounds and samples are a bit too generic sounding. If you could some how find other ones that sound more pleasing to replace what you have, this track would be perfect. :)
That sine sound is the 3xOSC in FL with only two sines playing at an octive interval. All the percussion is stuff that came with FL, so maybe that is why it sounds generic.
Its nice to know that I can make people jealous with my music...I think that you may be the first, though! ^_^
Those bongos are friggin sick
Manu Dibango action right here. ;) The track is pretty sick man. The only problem for me is that it seems to be a little empty. That and the lyrics are kind of repetative.
If you had some kick ass bass that was really audible in the track this would be 5 vote from me. The Api-ish bass is awesome but it doesn't really seem to fit in that well. But I'm giving you a four because of the echo effects you got on the vocalists voice and some of the industrialness you got in there is awesome. Like the dun-dun towards the end. :) If only there was more changes more often man. I was bored most of the time!!!
Thats why you have to listen to the full version ;)
Anyways i see where you're going. I don't mind you giving me a 7 and a 4 because you make the reasons real constructive. Thnx.
Laugh Out Loud
That was pretty funny man. ;) Only complaint is that this isn't exactly original (which is something I like to see from artists) and it was a bit too quiet for my tastes. But it's good, none-the-less. You didn't rip an midi did you? >_>
Haha, yeah, well, it was sort of just thrown together. It was sort of engineered to be crappy. And no, actually. I never ever rip midis. EVER. Thanks for the review.
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DJ Karbon - Star