AznPB's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aqua--_--]

Pretty good dude

The intro was awesome. I was hooked on your song really fast. ;) And I love your kick. Nice hard and fast. The only advice I could prolly give you is add effectrs to your instruments and try not to make your beats go away and come back so many times. That annoyed the crap outta me. :/ How am I supposed to get down to your music if the beat goes away so many times, eh? And your synth wasn't to my liking either. But the basic idea is awesome. If you had pro sounding stuff, I'm pretty sure this would be near the best in the portal. Good job man. :)

PERVOK responds:

yeah...i know i could have changed some things but...i dont know. i migh consider remixing this song to make changes.

[Eternity (ReMiX)]

Erm...

I'm really skeptic at the fact that you made this. But I noticed a lot of your work are remixes. All of them are actually. I'm kind of wondering if you're capable of making something original that is 100% made entirely by you.

And if what you say is the truth, that you don't take the original tracks and tweak them, then I'm really wondering how you can make such a convincing remix that sounds almost exactly like the original, but not make a track that is made all by you. And making such pro sounds with stock synths is extremely difficult. So what programs are you using to make your music? And what synths and other sounds as well? How much FX do you put into your channels man? I want to know!!!

BUT! If this track IS made by you, which I highly and very much doubt then good job. Sounds very pro. That's a plus. The only problem I have is the sudden tempo change and the cut off tweaking. Make it sound good, to muddy, then back. Then from good, to that telephone radio-ish effect, then back. The bass could of been better too if you ask me. The kick was nice and hard, which is always good but the bass man... Blargh! I hope you'll answer all of my questions and clear up any doubts by me and/or everyone else.

Scorpion132 responds:

Hey, thanks for the review. You see, after making 29 remixes, every now and then I like to steal a few bits from someone famous like Tiesto just to see if I can sneak away with it despite the fact that it would be impossible to get away with since millions of people have heard he’s music.

What I didn't count on was that an idiot listener such as you would think that it’s not my work.

Why with skills like that, why are you writing barely intelligible reviews to strangers when you could be doing detective work instead? You could go around to popular websites and find obvious similarities between my music and someone else’s.
I can see it now: "Detective Dipshit: Private Dick for hire." Keep up the great work, dumbass. How bout stop being a cry-baby suck-ass pussy and being jealous of my work. Tell me something, you know what’s stupid? Ill tell you what it is. Stupid is a very serious disease, and judging by your review you might have it; you should check with someone. Here are some symptoms of Stupid:

-You're a major business company.
-You own a $15,000 dollar car.
-You write a review to strangers babbling about stolen music because you think taking a 1000 level psychology course in a community college gives you the right to talk out of your ass.
-You think that sitting in meetings at work is productive.

Phew that was lot of writing (hope your small brain didn’t shut down...well actually I hope it did), in conclusion... Go screw yourself.

P.S. I make my own music, I just don’t want people that have the stupid disease listening to my music. It might make you more stupid.
But I made a special one just for you. Hope you like it: http://img116.exs.cx/img116/1913/tp4hx.swf

[TECHNOLOGIC(analog heart remix]

Good I Suppose...

The first thing I realized is that I noticed was that your mixed the original track up a bit. I guess that would make it a remix. I thought that this would be a tad bit more original than what you have right here.

Good thing is, it's a nice song and it's cool that you chose to do a remix on this for that contest. Very catchy too and you made it your own (I think) so that's a plus. It's long too. Everyone nowadays likes long tracks so good job on that!

What I don't like is the fact that you made it repetative. It took like 4 measures or whatever you have in your program for the beat to change up. I didn't really like waiting. :/ If you could add more variation to the track to keep my attention then that would make this an excellent remix. And if you added a lot more stuff of your own into the track it would be cool. I don't have the original so I can't tell what changes you made. I feel that you did a good job from what I know and hope to see... <_< >_> Less of this kind of submission! If you did do a remix, I'd like it to be a lot more you and less another artist. You know what I mean?

Well, you got my two cents on this. Do what you will with it. I'll keep checking up on you to see how much you're improving. ;)

oddkun responds:

thank you for checking it out! i did change the song alot, but i think i could add more. thanks very much! i'll repost an updated version soon!

[Devil Broz "Dark Side"]

Sick

This is bad!!! I love it! The intro was purely awesome! But then as soon as that 'farting' sound kinda came in, it kinda killed it for me. But last leg of the song kinda picked up and made up for it. Also another thing. What's with the pause later in the song? I was about to play another song when it started playing again. Solo beat, then synth came in. Then it ended suddenly. What's up with that?

JuggaloJosh responds:

Thx

[Techno 2000]

I love that lead

Good job. It sounds a lot like some of the hip-hop stuff that's being produced nowadays with that techno-ish feel to it but still sticking to it's roots by have a nice beat. This is a nice song to freestyle to. Reminds me of some crunk stuff.

The thing I like about this the most is probably that lead you have going on the whole time. It's very nice. Simple but I can get down to it. Good job on this one. Hope to see some more like this.

JuggaloJosh responds:

1st of all, thx for review :). And second listin to all my new songs that i just made, 3rd do u like my music?

[Indefinite End]

This is pretty decent

This would make a really great song, you just need help with mastering, that's all.

And just to let you know, listen to some dance stuff to know what it sounds like. You could head over to http://www.digitallyimported.com to get an idea. (Please don't ban me!)

What you need is a lead bass, some kicks, and few hats. Go ahead and AIM Comet if you like but what you should really do is show this to someone like czer323 for mastering. HE can helkp you out with that. He helped me and I came a long ways... Don't submit much to NG anymore though. People vote low on my songs just cuz they don't like the style of music. To tell you the truth, if you don't liek that type of music, don't listen to it you bastards!

But anyways, all in all, I think this is decent. Just talk to my friend Czer323 and tell him I sent you and show him this or what ever you like and he'll teach you a few things.

illumatiks responds:

yea i kno wut yu mean bout people votin low cuz they dont like tha style, people aint used to the more complicated rap beats i do. Ill ask ya friend when i get back ta NJ, thanks for tha advice.

[TheComet-TC Rave]

Better than your last

Wow, you got better over two months of time. Although some of your sounds are off and that preset melody you get with FL? Don't use that or any other ones. It's good to be original. Send me this song and I'll remaster it for you and send it back to you. See what you think.

Like I said, you're getting better which is a good sign. This isn't very good but all you need is more variations and some plugins. Time will tell... Meanwhile, keep on workin'!

TheComet responds:

I'll send it to u once I get AIM back (Need to redownload, probably tommarrow night)
how'd I get better over 2 months of time...uhm...too much time in 2 months of time :P
actually, I had next to no motivation to do flash with no net access so I turned to making music.
Btw, I did notice I made one off-tune beat in the start but I can't fix it without it being too high >.<(the softened arp)
btw, I have another FL song I'm working on but I can't think of a good lead for it >.< I'll probably redl AIM tomarow (like I said) so I can show you everything. check out my new club beats if you can, mixed in FL with them!

[Ice Cream Truck]

Spooky

For me, this was very original. I've never heard something like this on AP and I commend you for that. This is some really spooky stuff. I can image this being used in one of those freaky ass flash cartoons like Smile!

This isn't really good as a song but it did have very good effects and the ice cream truck music in the distance was very good too... Sounded like it was broken...

Overall, good job.

JASH responds:

Thanks alot!! I am going to use it as an intro to a song, but I could see how this short, eerie part can be used more than a full somg for flash. Thanks again, it really helps.

[Problems With Self Expression?]

Oh Shit!

Damn man... This is huge jump for you. I congratulate you in such a fine piece of work as this. Very kick ass! Man Inept this is better than any the beats I have ever came up with! And I see you put many layers of drums which is always plus and there were hella variations. Too many for me to count...

Overall, this is a excellent submission. Even though the instruments other than the drums seemed a little weak, the drums were the main focus here so I'm going to give a five just for that. Good job!

Ineptitude responds:

thanks a lot, i really like some of your track, too. :)

but zero originality? cmon.