Ha-HA! Damn this guy...
Since when did you get this good???
Holyshitmonkeys you're not dead :O
Are you trying to make some kind of statement? If so, I'm with you.
OMG why do people think tht soo much
The melody is a tad overpowering. Only by like... 0.01% though. So no biggie. :)'
I'm kind of sad knowing that all this song has is it's melody. That's the track's focal point and the rest of it all (I don't think) received the same amount of R4U attention. :( I really love beats man, and so should you! Convert to PBism!
So I think that's the only thing I could ask of you out of this song. A tad more beat variation would help out a lot. Because your instruments just faded out in my mind. I paid them no special attention after awhile. I only listened to your cool little melody.
I've never listened to the original so I can't say much about the melody anyways. :/ Just that it's a shame that the melody wasn't entirely created by you. :(
You see... That's my only gripe about remixes. If it sounds awesome, it's based off of someone else's work already anyways. And you'd only do a remix of something that sounds good, right? Unless you're so good you can make a crappy song that everyone hates into an awesome radio killer track. :P
But yeah. The track was fun and I liked the melody. :) Was the latter half created by you? Cuz if it was, great!!! :D
lol, this entire track was basically by me. The very first melody that comes in, thats just using the same notes as the real song, but then everything else i made my own, because i didnt feel like remxing a song. why would you remix something already good? why not make it better than it already is? but ya, i agree with you on the melody thing. To me this is basically just ear-candy, lol, and those strings near the middle of the intro make me happy, cuz they make it sound super epic, lol.
anywho, thanks Azn, im a big fan of you. Hey! maybe we can collab and i can learn something? and maybe not, lol.
Hmmm... How can I put this?
Eh... Don't really listen to Inustrial so I kinda don't know what to expect from the genre itself so therefore, I don't know what to say? Although I like to be very helpful in my reviews... Hmm.
I sort of felt that it was very busy. Maybe TOO busy. Busy songs can still sound awesome but the busyness is just busy.
Feeling the guitar in the back when it's there for a few brief moments. :) Oh! I just noticed that. :P Yes! That's very good! (Kind of hard to listen to your track and watch my spelling at the same time. :)) Your song is changing constantly! That is a great aspect that many tracks should have! Unless, of course, you have a melody that is so good it just repeats forever and no one cares because it's soo goooood. :P But yeah.
A lot of SFX and stuff. Nice little addons like that are fun, too. :D But yeah... I think that's all I can manage to say. Your track didn't explode in my face or anything like that. :( But if you could make in the future that did that, I'd give you props.
Yeah, it's supposed to be busy, so what could I say : )
-Thanks for the review!
Whoaness. Whoa. Hmmm... Where can I start? I'll just listen to the song over again...
Alrighty. The beginning, sadly enough, wasn't as interesting as the rest of the song for me. But when it started building up, I was like... Damnnnn, hella good. Yeah, a lot of mainstream hip-hop doesn't sound very much like this. Maybe you could find some underground stuff that would sound like this? Oh! And when the snare like... Pitched down for the first time I got really excited about review this song! So yeah...
The effects, again are good. :D But it'd be nice if that weird snap clap snare thingy had more as well. The snare in the back reminds me of some oldschool too. :D So that's fun. :P
The track itself isn't much if I had to say so myself. Lyrics play a huge role in the pace and fluidity of a hip-hop song and are the core of the track itself. A hip-hop track without lyrics is kind of meh. but I'm not saying you should have some. Just saying that if you compare your nice little dark and moody track here against... I don't know... Techn9ne or Gang Starr or something, it doesn't have the same feel / quality.
Actually... You can just ignore that last paragraph. It isn't TOO relevant. >_> So yeah. Good job. I think what is right now for you is the effects and stoof. More effects would make me really really really really happy. :)
lol thanks for the looong review!
Not really my cup o' tea :/
But! I'm still going to return the favor. Hrmmm... One thing I notice is maybe you could try adding some more FX to your samples? Namely your beat samples like the kick, clap, open hat, snare, and snap. :) Because the rest of your sounds echo and ish, your instruments feel really out of place for meh.
I like the idea of a flute, which represents you know... Calmness, purity, and what those dark foreboding sounds don't! So the clash was really interesting, adding a nice little aspect to the song. I really like "Light vs Dark" kind of music. :)
The melodies for the flute really good. Reminded me of a certain game with a certain instrument on a certain system that was certainly the best one out of all of the series. But yeah!
The song was really different. I don't think I've heard a song with a flute and 4x4 until now. :) Good job. Just remember to add a teeny bit more effects to keep me interested and maybe through in some melody changes? That could also help keep someone's attention. :D See ya around!
Thanx for the tips!
Hah! Sounds pretty kewl. ;) I don't remember your stuff sounding like this last time I visited your page. :D
My only gripe is that the kick is kinda meh, y'know? It's quality is that of the same caliber as the rest of the samples you got going on.
I think you could've done a tad bit more. Kinda simplistic don't you believe? A break or something would've helped it out.
And the end of the track started sounding awesome. It sounds almost as if it were a track from a mix on a cd. ;)
I hope that in the future you come out with some better stuff than this track. I also hope that it is super awesome, makes you popular within the portal, and is totally 100% original. Remixes are fun but you don't get the same pleasure as you do from a track composed entirely by you, right? Keep it up.
Uhh. Don't know what to say really
I'm just about as confused as the other guy. ;) The bass sorta reminded me of Digi's "I Still Believe In Your Eyes" in the beginning. Other than that. I found it most repetative. The bells (when the melody on the bells change it kinda threw the song off :/), a bass, then a beat. Also... Your instruments sound helka stock mang! Get some new samples. :D If you need any, I could provide you some. 'Practice Makes Perfect'.
i know - I'll fix eventually.. :P
thanks for the honest review!
This is some good quality stuff right here mang. :D I'm thoroughly impressed. :D Nothing I could really poke at that was exceptionally bad. It was really good. :P
Piano really pulled this track together, I loved it. The beat was solid and you had some decent basslines. High strings were a great touch as well. Like others have said already, it's short. Then again, most beats tend to repeat themselves anyway, right? If this had a brilliant mc and a nice female chorus, it'd be bangin for sure.
Overall, it's nice. My friends would dig this as much as I. ;) 4/5
Not the best
But since it's your first submitted Dnb, I'll go easy on you. It's too short! Maybe cuz the fact that it's a loop but still. Loops can be longer. ;) Bass was alright, drums were kickin', then the beat change was a nice add in. But I didn't know about the bass at that part. Not bad mang. :) Are you sure Dnb is something you want to get into? I think you're already bad-ass in trance. Why spread your skills when you can focus them?
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